Tow love birds

by mo3taz   May 2, 2012


My love, we are like two love birds, flying, searching for our dreams
My love, I can't fly alone because I will fall and I want to keep flying forever
My love, we are flying over mountains over streams
The sky is for you and me, we own this paradise together
Yes it's ours, and I'm all yours, I want to say that with a scream

I wish that I'm a feather in your body; to be close to you is my dream
I'm the prisoner of your eyes, you are the light for my nights
Taking a rest on our olive tree, on our branch, the soft wind playing with our feather
Time to go and keep searching my love, let's find the happiness, in the heights
I promise, you will be my only lover, forever.

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  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    Okay the second stanza third line feather should be feathers because it is plural in the sense you wrote it. It is one of those english grammar things that can be frustrating and I think u meant two instead of tow in your title. But I actually really liked this one, the story you told and the idea of flying is romantic in a sense and it was a free verse poem but it was very well written and I think it had nice flow and meaning.

  • 12 years ago

    by Moonlit Candles

    This was a great poem. You did really well here. This would be like a free verse poem. Not so much with rhyming but it was done very well. You showed a lot of emotion here. All in all a great write. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by mo3taz

    Thanks :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Kate

    It's good buuuuuuut, nope nothing bad about it. Very sweet :)

  • 12 years ago

    by mo3taz

    I'm not sure about this one, it's one of my first poems.

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