Flying

by Kitty Kurse   May 2, 2012


And with wings that took flight so easily,
And with wind that gusts so full,
I'm on my way to a better life-
One that isn't so cruel.
One that consists of love;
Of joy, and fulfillment.
One that will give me a sense of better days.

And when I'm standing on top of the shivery mountain steeps from above,
I'll be proving you wrong and give others like me an early opportunity to fly like a dove.
Because once your little wings take you away,
Your decisions and choices, they will be made;
Some of us will make some mistakes.
But we all must-
Take in what we can take,
Give what we can give,
And learn what we can learn in life.
We all must live;
It's your decision to live happily.
You can not let life gust by so rapidly.
Just let your wings grow,
Let the winds steady surge take you away;
Just go with the flow.

I will finally push away the mistakes I've made to this day,
And fly higher than any mountain top that may come to me in any way.
And no matter what the dismay-
I will keep on flying higher;
Higher than the clouds up to where I can touch the sun.
Where I can feel the warmth of its beams unto my face,
I will be filled with so much grace.
So much love and joy,
I can be happy now that my life will not be destroyed.
Thankful, now that I have made the right choice.

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  • 12 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    Intriguing creative write, and i like the use of words you chose within the poem, great job :)

  • 12 years ago

    by East Poetry

    This was a very inspiring write, I can tell you grew probably grew a lot from writing this poem, it shows how head strong you are and confident as well, You can tackle any thing in life. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I don't like flying that's one of my fear's i'm scared of heights :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    "
    And when I'm standing on top of the shivery mountain steeps from above,
    I'll be proving you wrong and give others like me an early opportunity to fly like a dove.
    Because once your little wings take you away,
    Your decisions and choices, they will be made;
    Some of us will make some mistakes.
    But we all must-
    Take in what we can take,
    Give what we can give,
    And learn what we can learn in life.
    We all must live;
    It's your decision to live happily.
    You can not let life gust by so rapidly.
    Just let your wings grow,
    Let the winds steady surge take you away;
    Just go with the flow"

    That stanza is so, so inspirational. Such a strong message you have portrayed here. Thank you for writing this. :)

    • 12 years ago

      by Kitty Kurse

      Youuurrrr wellcommeee and thank YOU for commenting!

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    I thought this piece was inspirational and well written. . the only problem is how u started the poem with "and" but maybe that was me but overall this poem was refreshing to read...

    flyyy :D 5/5 from me

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