My best friend
by Broken girl you cause pain May 2, 2012
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Best friends to the end best friend until we die.. you will be my frist friend, if im scared will u be there. if i was scared of the dark would u be there to hold me. if i was down will you be there. if i cry will u give me your shoulder to cry. if im mad wold u be there to com me down... |
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12 years ago
So much emotion and feeling, and it was going great through the way, the wording and such, wonderful
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12 years ago
by Lofallenve
I like the message you portrayed in this poem. Just what really irked me about it, and what would have gotten you full rates, are your misspellings. I think if you were to go back and change the "u"s to "yous" and actually type out your words it would be better. (:
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12 years ago
by Chris
I like it and you should know the answers to those questions lol
