by Chris
I like it and you should know the answers to those questions lol |
by Lofallenve
I like the message you portrayed in this poem. Just what really irked me about it, and what would have gotten you full rates, are your misspellings. I think if you were to go back and change the "u"s to "yous" and actually type out your words it would be better. (: |
So much emotion and feeling, and it was going great through the way, the wording and such, wonderful |