Comments : These men

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I could certainly see a part fo you that longs to believe...and you should ya know Yaks, cos I reckon you are beautiful and you deserve to be loved and taken care of...

    I sort of sense and I am most often wrong but to me it seems you are talking about your youth, your childishness or innocence and how you feel someone older shouldn't be who you fall for.

    I think the length is off putting but definately worth the read

    love
    xx

    • 12 years ago

      by Yakari Gabriel

      "feel someone older shouldn't be who you fall for."

      Tara has it mense!

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    YAKZZZ i will comment lataaaarrrr but just keep in mind that mwa u r awesomeee...perfect write hunnnn

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    You want something truly honest: you are something Bigger than you feel.. just have faith in yourself.

    If you publish your books, I'd be the first to buy them.

    That is awesome.

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I have always believed in myself no matter what people say. Its true you can always know if men mean what they say coz no all say things for the right motives.

    Well written.