Dancing in the Rain

by Richie   May 2, 2012


The time is perfect the time is now
I take your hand and off we go
out in the streets to dance in the rain
Call me crazy, but your insane
But who really cares lets dance it away

You laugh and I grin
Then I pull you in, close for one last spin.
I hold you in my arms and I look into your eyes
So pretty and blue
I think I'm falling for you.

Spinning and dipping to the beat of the rain
Flowing to the sweet song of the wind
With the soft pale light of the moon on our skin
This moment can last for ever
I hope it never ends

Please take my hand
And let's go dance in the rain

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  • 12 years ago

    by Amber

    Love it

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Enjoyed reading dis smooth piece jus like d first drop of rain..richie..u r an amazin poet..e

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    ^^Dancing in the rain..hmm, in the first place the title catch my curiosity..well, the first stanza is quiet interesting, the words used was like dancing in the lines...as like your title dancing in the rain..lol:D--"The time is perfect the time is now"like it..
    --Spinning and dipping to the beat of the rain
    Flowing to the sweet song of the wind
    With the soft pale light of the moon on our skin
    This moment can last for ever
    I hope it never ends

    ^^The truth--i like poems sound like song to sing, ..and love the flows..and the message, my God! so sweet and very romantic...

    The whole piece is really perfect--fascinating!
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Amy

    Favourite poem yet!! Your a very good writer!

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I thought this was very sweet and I loved the idea of dancing in the rain it shows a free spirit and happiness in the relationship described here. I liked how you expressed your feelings for this person and thought this was very well done, considering you are a new writer. Great job!

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