Powerful, I'm thinking with that question. I like that, I was reading and I felt like you were telling me a story and at the end askig me that question, though, I'm not sure what to answer yet about it.

Yes I agree powerful, and also thought provoking , it really made me think reading this and I like how you ended it with a question. . . makes the reader think . but anyways it was a good poem i liked the flow of too nicely done :)

It's written so powerful make the reader wonder. Leaving the poem with a question

Karla I feel sorry for this woman. There's so much anguish and sadness drenched in this whole poem it breaks my heart.

This is amazing and an awesome write I loved it!

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