Comments : The Missing Part

  • 12 years ago

    by Kitty Kurse

    Nice use of words, good way of putting it
    "No longer feeling alone in the world.

    She's found her other half.

    He makes her feel happy.

    He knows how tot make her laugh even when

    she's upset.

    He's like an angel sent from above."

    The only thing I didn't really see that much here, is I couldn't find a flow withing the words, but all together good write.

    • 12 years ago

      by Jewel Cook

      Thanks and yeah I'm still working on that. I'm still an amateur when it comes to this stuff