The were parts where I felt a deep connection, and I love that.

I love the last line too... Sister of the moon sounds striking.

Wow I really like this, but when I read it I got a weird feeling, I love it:)
Perfectly written

Blessed Be!

Beautiful although I had mixed feelings reading it.

Love this Maple :) Everything about it every line!

Check this: fourth *(forth)

No doubt you are a fantastic poetess! To be able to write a poem that so many connect with is true talent-keep em comin!
Lostlove

I don't know if you meant to make it into a shape, but to me it looks like a candle.. an odd one on a candlestick. It reminds me of the many rough times we've shared and promises of candles being light for various reasons. ;)

I love this hun. I think this poem fits you personally so I love that connection we get with you.

Awesome
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I love the shape of this poem! I think poems should be visually appealing as well as poetically appealing and this was perfect in both aspects! I liked the short lines and the way you created a dream like pace with your words. I felt mesmerized and illuminated with the emotion this poem created. The imagery you created with your words like "sapphire" and "star dust" was flawless and helped add to the mystical atmosphere. Well done! I really enjoyed this one :)