In the safety of her bed,

I absolutely love how you started this poem just by reading the first line i knew it was going to be something special, something sweet, and something beautiful ....you did a very good job conveying your emotions. . . . its a beautiful piece.

Nice poem
The emotion is strong
and the flow is nice
5/5 keep writing =)

Nicely written :) i like how you described everything delicately . i could see everything you wrote

"Slipping off to sleep
I hear you speak
"Hello, pillow talk"
It's been a week
We whisper a smile
Quietly giggle a tear
Reminiscing from the day
To over all our years ."
I really loved this, your flow was great and the emotions are strong. LOVED it:)

Once I started reading, I knew that I would like this piece. It has this aura of love an sweetness, the one I love. I also appreciate the use of nature in this poem. To me it adds the voice of the author and I felt the voice in this piece. Though, there are a few parts tht are a bit rocky but not many just a few. Aside from that this one is really really good. Nice collab.

The diction is perfect and imagery awesome.i could really picture it all happen.great write

The diction is perfect and imagery awesome.i could really picture it all happen.great write

The diction is perfect and imagery awesome.i could really picture it all happen.great write

The diction is perfect and imagery awesome.i could really picture it all happen.great write

"Our bodies may grow older,
but our love grows stronger."

my favorite lines 5/5