by Victoria May 4, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Yesterday, was perfect, |
by Yrem Crish
Amazing work:) |
by Lofallenve
I like the Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow stanzas. They were my favorite and they fit together quite well. :) Just my only critique with the poem, is some of the rhymes you did felt forced to me, like it didn't flow as well as it could have. :S Could be that or I just don't like rhyming poems much. |