Sadness Is All Around (Haiku)

by Kitty Kurse   May 4, 2012


Tear drops on flowers
Water trickling off the leaves
Sadness is around

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  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is very creative. You have inspired me to try a Haiku as well

    • 12 years ago

      by Kitty Kurse

      Well I'm glad I inspired you:)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I got the feeling like you were aiming towards making a haiku or a senryu...

    The only thing is that the middle line has six syllables instead of seven.

    Aside from that I found this creative and descriptive.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Ninja

    Nice. i like it.

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