This was great. Loved the use of imagery here. Thought it was done nicely. Great job. :)

Kiss my lips and bedazzle me,
Wear my love like a token of gratitude.
One that makes the blind man see,
That shines brighter than any diamond;
A feeling deeper than the sea.
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The wording was good and the imagery was perfect. Its short but it flows smoothly and conveys something bigger than its size. I felt the longing and your wishes in this piece. Well written.