Enjoyed reading 5/5

I think that this poem is really meaningful, especially since there are a lot of people who probably feel exacly this way due to some serious sickness they might have. I have to admit that I can relate to this piece in some way because of personal experiences(not as bad)
I like how you both explained what was taking place and tried to make sure that those who are left realize ones more that they are dear to you(the speaker).
Usually I am not a fan of repetition, but since you didn't overdo it I thought it fit. Especially since that is one of those things that keep running through ones mind during that time. Both, whether remembered at all and if so then in what way?

Touching poem