"It is clear and clean from last years sorrows,
Giving you strength to live until tomorrow."
---Love these lines.
Perhaps this is one of the most inspiring poems I'll ever read. Considering what you've gone through, the emotions you poured out into this piece is just overwhelming (in a good way of course). Really nice. Everytime I need an uplifting message, I'll be sure to read this, that's why it's going to me favorites^^
"It is clear and clean from last year(')s sorrows,"
"Because in spring(,) nature is pure and clean."
--just some punctuation to read this better.
Keep writing :)
-X

Aw girl this is cute. it sounds like you're doing better and thats GREAT :) love you girl

I like this poem, its has good imagery and emotions. . ihad this cleansing tone when reading it. .. . . so awesome opem keep on writing :)

I like this poem:) I can just picture this so clearly 5/5

I really like the last stanza. i thought it spoke of alot of things..like you have been reborn..well written

This is beautiful!!!!! Love it!

I love the way it written. Soothing the heart in peace and I feel while reading this I am in the paradise of nature...good written, keep always writing:=)

I love how refreshing this poem is because even thought i adore dark poetry, your poem is something I could step into :)