Hope in Sunrise (Diamante)

Its always beautiful to write about nature. One surely gets a feeling of warmth and belonging. You described the splendor of the sunshine in the 1st half of the poem, words choosen perfectly. While, in the 2nd half of the piece, you veered into the peaceful dim sunset. A gradual descend from the initial start. An impressive piece i must say. Vibrantly made. Bravo!!! :) ..

I dig these little organized poems. So cool how it start out with the sunrise and then contrasts into the sunset.

I really love the flow in this poem a lot :)

Sun rise, sun set, I love this piece itss short and powerrful and I realy liked how you wrote that middle, you're sound so poetric in this short poem. awesome writing keep it up!

Its another unique poem for me..short and beautiful!!
we also have these kinds of short poems in nepalese literature,we have different sort of name for it.......what do u actually call it in english??i m curious to know.