It's beautiful, though I thought it should be under 'nature poems'. It has a relaxing vibe. I get that everytime a day ends and the sun went down, the moon is high up and the stars are shining. The tone and atmosphere sets a good vibe within the piece and the simple word choice completes this. Nice, nice..
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Yeah, i agree with the above comment, but anyhow, life is very connected to nature and vice versa so it doesnt matter, lol. This is really good yknow, you chose the words quite well in this one. I like it.

Nice
i love it
the form is fitting gr8 xD
good work =)

I llove how you made it go from sunrise to sunset. it flowed rogether very nicely :)

Little things portray Life's beauty...and here, you proved it, yet another time! Good job..

These words flew off my tongue so swiftly and meaningful, short but entrierly enjoyable, great poem

Abslutely beautiful

Its another unique poem for me..short and beautiful!!
we also have these kinds of short poems in nepalese literature,we have different sort of name for it.......what do u actually call it in english??i m curious to know.

Sun rise, sun set, I love this piece itss short and powerrful and I realy liked how you wrote that middle, you're sound so poetric in this short poem. awesome writing keep it up!

I really love the flow in this poem a lot :)

I dig these little organized poems. So cool how it start out with the sunrise and then contrasts into the sunset.

Its always beautiful to write about nature. One surely gets a feeling of warmth and belonging. You described the splendor of the sunshine in the 1st half of the poem, words choosen perfectly. While, in the 2nd half of the piece, you veered into the peaceful dim sunset. A gradual descend from the initial start. An impressive piece i must say. Vibrantly made. Bravo!!! :) ..