Comments : I'm just Here

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    NIce rhyming and flowing poem that holds a beautiful message.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Very romantic and sweet. i like the way you expressed your feelings here..the imagery are brilliant.
    **I'm not some angel from above,
    No warrior princess, no cupid of love.

    I'm not the sunshine after the rain,
    Not the light that shines to erase your pain.
    ^^these are the stanzas I love to read..i like your thoughts here. Well-penned:=)
    keep writing more
    5/5-C

  • 12 years ago

    by Illusion

    I'm just here reading your beautiful poem,
    We are all there promising impossible,
    While am sitting here hoping my best could improve.
    We should promise the best not impossibe.. I love your message..

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Nice message!I like your lines and rhymes.
    Great poem.well written!