by Mello193 May 5, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
In this there in nothing |
I really like how you compared Oblivion and Hell... I sometimes wonder too if it would be worse to have absolutely nothing, no feelings just blank and complete darkness... or be in Hell with eternal pain. I would prefer Heaven lol, but this poem is thought provoking. |
by Paul Gondwe
Your rhyming is really fun to read. I really liked the second stanza. |