Wow this was totally amazing
i love the way you wrote it
yeh human kind cant predict the day weather can change at any time
Thanks for posting this really enjoyed

Yeah, this is amazing! Well-written
5/5:D

The imagination in this piece is amazing..i also liked your indepth description of the seasons

You're right humans cant predict how a day will go, unless they plan or hear a weather report, hehe but anyways this was a good write, i like the little imagery you used but i also love the changed that you put with different seasons and make included all of them, nice work on this piece.

5/5

I like this overall.. The only critique I have is perhaps the repetition of 'day', and the 'mine own' again, archaic doesn't fit the tone of this piece, it did not even add anything. I don't know why I'm being picky today haha. But, great piece.
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Yup, the weather can change on its own and we won't know the exact day. But I feel that humans can sort of predict but with the way we are treating our nature the weather is becoming more and more unpredictable.
Good piece.

Beautiful and well written!
5/5 (: