Nature Of Life (Mirror Loop)

by Yrem Crish   May 6, 2012


Hope of life full
with determination
make you strengthen
to stand again.

Challenging life is
struggle to survive;
Endless is journey of
life

Life
of journey is endless;
Survive to struggle
is life challenging.

Again stand to
strengthen you make
determination with
full life hope.

The third and the fourth stanzas are mirror loop of first and second stanzas...
What do you think about it?

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  • 12 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    I really liked the mirror idea you have in this poem, very creative. It would of been difficult to make the last two stanza's make sense when mirrored, i've not seen the mirror form before in a poem but the poem flowed really well :)

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very creative, well done :)

  • 12 years ago

    by East Poetry

    Oh wow!! I think that is one of the coolest things EVER in a poem. Im not kidding. I'm going to have to make a poem like this now. This is a favorite

  • 12 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Tho am not familiar with art of such writing i cn only say itz really beautiful,kip t up

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Great poem!Well written!

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