Still, that will never be, her love
slowly fades to oblivion as I write
trying to comfort my mind, telling it
everything is going to be OK

awwh i really liked the ending of this poem, well I like the poem as a whole too, I know how hard it is when love ends somehow on either side, but i like this poem nice work

Once the choice has been made, we have to
learn to live with it. Life goes on no matter
what and yes it is going to be alright in time
5/5

Yeah, everything will be ok just leave it to time. :)

"Yesterday, I thought I heard her cries,
they echoed in my head"
---I'm fond of the start. It has a restless vibe to it and 'yesterday' was nicely placed here, gave the persona depth that he has been feeling like this for quite some time now.
"I have to be a man and live with
my choices,"
---Choices, decisions.. Most of the time, we only have one and we must decide well and think about it before choosing, because we cannot go back and redo our actions to prevent mistakes.
"Now, I sit all day and think about
the love that could have been,"
---I like the little story this has. The yesterday to now, and retaining the restless vibe and sad tone to it.
The ending lines were my favorite. I love the word 'oblivion' and how you placed it. Somehow, I was also comforted.
-X

WOW, this is so sad and I can totally see your emotions. Sometimes people make mistakes and we just have to deal with them the best way we can. This honestly made me want to cry because I can relate to it so well. Amazing write,

5/5

Not sure what you did to lose this love, or even if it was completely your fault, the poem insinuates it is. We all have to live with our choices, but the beautiful thing is we can learn from them too.