by M I L L Y May 7, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I CAN FINALLY SAY IM ACTUALLY IN-LOVE |
by Lofallenve
I'm in agreement with Xanthe. The all caps just really threw me off on this poem. :S |
by Kitty Kurse
Um, is your caps broken?,, lol Good poem its really sweet, needs more metaphors.. |
by Wicked Ways
I dont like the caps either, but over all the poem is good I loved your lines, they're deep and you can tell your emotions go very deep from reading this poem |
by Max
This is beautiful piece |
by Paul Gondwe
I felt this poem was beautifully written though i agree with Xantha in that the capitalization must go. This was well written with emotions, much has already been said so i will stop here.. |