Oh wo Andrea this is just aweosme, the tittle just drove me in and the use of words oh wow this is amazing great job :)

I agree^^ you've done an amazing job here. I'm not really into 'romantic' or love poems, but the 'catastrophe' really pulled me in to read this, out of curiosity haha. And I'm glad I did, this is amazing.
"These eyes wave goodbye
to a violet sunset,"
--what can i say?? simply beautiful. Perhaps the persona is crying.. Beautiful imagery, i just love it
Keep writing :)
-X

I loved loved loved this piece Andrea!! I thought you did excellent with the topic, your descriptions were awesome and totallly made me picture everything.

That last stanza....wow....brilliant!