Lovers Pain

by ArtistrySoul   May 7, 2012


You showed what our love can do,
I nurse you with my love each day
we have taught each other so much
never have we felt this way ever before
sparking these love flames

We must be crazy...

We must be crazy,
with another Lover pain...

Were driving each other love wild
and its turning out incredible...

To lay my eyes on you,
I feel like I have set sail,
an action I can not help
With your confidence don't stop now
your lips on mine and mine on yours,
i'll keep you warm in these insulated arms
that stops you shaking from screaming clouds

I'm here really close, my intentions and senses
are to never let you go :)

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  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Ok so i've been sneakly reading your poems at work a little this afternoon and i have to say im diggin em :-)

    This one in particular, i love the flow and imagery of your pen here, also i really like your word choice too !!

    i love a good love poem and the feelings seem to ooooooooze out in this, seriously great job :-)

    EDIT: also i really like the shape most of your writes take they always seem interesting to me *shrugs*

    • 12 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Thank you!!! :)

      It just made my day not only the fact you like, and commented on my poem but other poems I have written caught your attention too, very kind of you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    I like the flows..the rhyme and the words you used in this poem..so lovely and awesome. Just keep writing..I know you have a great potential. God bless:))

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    This was such a lovely poem .. .. it really was :)) al i have left to say is stunning !!!!

    • 12 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      :) thx.......you have made my day :0)

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