Comments : Cower Odd

  • 12 years ago

    by Hadassah grey

    Ah said it before n i'm gonna scream it again..u'v got style!!..gets me thinking...

  • 12 years ago

    by Hadassah grey

    Ah said it before n i'm gonna scream it again..u'v got style!!..gets me thinking...

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I like this poem and the flow :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by rock serenade

    Oh man!!! soo powerful I think I've got the deep meaning interesting piece 5/5:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Incapable traps faced no contest no match
    like the seas that were said to be parted
    'My time has not come, I am here just as one'
    As if life, death and dreams had just started.
    .....
    This was my fav stanza. You have a way with words which is quite remarkable, i really liked that. great work

  • 12 years ago

    by CryingHeart

    Way too strong flow of emotions you wear your heart on sleeve 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Just A Stupid Girl

    Very nice flow. it has power. great job :) 5/5