Comments : Addiction

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Don't let that addiction control you
    you need to find a way to control it
    easier said than done, like with any other
    addiction. 5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by Hannah Lizette

      I'm not addicted to drugs, i have seen first hand though so many people i love... and i have seen how they act and at times i feel their pain dealing with it... so i thought i would write a poem expressing the feelings of addiction.. that they are on a rollercoaster and they are controlled by it. thanks for the vote! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    ^^
    i agreee, try to stop.
    Good poem:)

  • 12 years ago

    by hayet serenade

    TOTALLY TRUE

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Addicted to writing poems :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    Seems your a fan of free verse? eitehr way really cool. peom. cant say anything that hasnt already been said but awesome nonetheless

  • 12 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    My interpretation is that this is a sort of comparison between love and addiction. Showing the differences whilst also showing the similarities. Is that right?
    Anyway, another fantastic write. You av described addiction and love just excellently.

  • 12 years ago

    by Mello193

    This to me seems like artistic propaganda like your trying to get a vague message across, i like this one a lot because that is exactly how addiction feels. awesome write

  • 11 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Tht's how an addiction feels, thought there are different types of addictions. Some that people may not even consider to be bad but an addiction of any kind controls our life. Your poem opens awareness, and it amazes me how your style improved. Keep it up.