Uv got style friend n i love it..brief but filled with much sense |
Uv got style friend n i love it..brief but filled with much sense |
by Silent Girl
I feel cursed very good poem :) |
Thank you, I prefer my Cower Odd though! what Poem of your do you prefer if you can pick one? |
I sometimes get skeptical of rhyme schemes, and here you've made it essential to the flow. It is striking. The call and answer to your audience drew me in, and asked me to feel with you or against you or just feel anything at all. In all your self-deprecation here, your poem calls me to know you better, rather than to step away. |
Thank you for your comment. I’m glad it made you feel something, it was an escape at the time. Just noticed your instead of you’re which I will now edit! |