It is sweet and romantic poem indeed..even though the girl forgot you, you still love her..that is the real love..do not look to negative things behind her...instead, the beautiful things she shared wth you..just a little mistake,--the thoughts of you brings tears to my eyes--the thoughts of you bring tears to my eyes.
--my memory of you is my treasure--after you must be plural(are)..
And--reamber--remember..
Over all great poem.

This is a great poem :) I absolutely loved it. it is better then most that you have written. it was amazing in every way!

That poem is VERY BEAUTIFUL! lol i tihnk everyone will always remember their first love no matter the out come and gosh i hate to think of the past i think about the idiot who got my heart and broke it lol

Wow, this is sweet, lovely awesome, beautiful, infact this is just wow. :) great job kelwin, i love this.

I truly love this.. Very well written