Remember me

by Mattias Ostling   May 8, 2012


I see you every day
and I dream of you
every night.
Your golden hair, like
the sunrise, outshines the
moon at night - precious
like starlight.
Your eyes, they shine like
radiant stars in the black of
night.

They say beauty is subjective,
but I find it impossible to believe
that anyone could ever see you
as less than a goddess walking
the Earth

I cannot help wondering
what you think of me.
Do you see me, when I'm
absent?
Do you hear me, when you're
asleep?

Know that I'd be happy
if I were nothing more than
the dust on the floor within
the mansion of your thoughts.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "Yourgolden hair, like
    the sunrise, outshines the
    moon at night"
    ---I'm particularly fond of this part. Really like the simile here.
    And the ending was unexpected, for me. Nicely done

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    This is such a beautiful poem. I really like the way you have described your feelings for this person. I love the fact that you see her the way you do and you think that everyone will see her the same way, no matter what she looks like or is. I think that just shows how much affection you have for her.

    Beautiful poem.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Awhhh this is so beautiful , im a sucker for love poems like this , with this pure love, i know the feeling as well, and it realy does sound like an admirer :) and yeshhh go ask...

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Sounds like a secret admirer. Does her eyes
    see what you see? Does she think of of you while absent. Only one way to find out,
    go and ask 5/5

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