by Xanthe
"I kept my eyes on that empty trail, |
by Kitty Kurse
"His cloak of a black wolf fur billowed out behind him, |
by nouriguess
I agree with my Xanthe, your Shakespearian way of words doesn't always do you a favor. You must be careful of how to use words. In dark poetry, I see lots of complicated, new (and sometimes it sucks) words. Darkness isn't about complicated words, it's about complicated feelings. |