Don't lose your faith to God, for it was the reason why we can handle certain things and makes us stand still even at the time of test.

~So many scatter thoughts
I think it would be better if it's written to
"So many [scattered] thoughts

I've notice some typos too, but anyway it's okay there's no big deal. I think it would be better if you'd proofread first your writings before you would post it. Hope it helps.

But hey, you've done so well in overall. Keep writing! ^_^

This was an interesting poem and contained a lot of emotion. This was my favorite part:

He just looked at me and smiled
And helped me onto my feet
"My girl you have much to learn
And many more challenges to meet

In life there are so many challenges we must face and so many things we will learn. I really liked this part.

There were multiple times throughout the poem that had grammatical errors and would have benefited a little more with an adjustment in the flow. Some of it seemed forced and I know this can be a challenge with rhyming poems. My main style of writing is in the rhyming fashion and something that has helped me has been to force myself to use words I normally wouldn't use. Each time I am about to use an adjective, I search for a synonym of that word and try and use it. That keeps things fresh and not so cliche all the time.

I love this poem. But, do not lose your faith. God puts us all through alot of trials just to show us that we can overcome anything with him by us.

This poem really touched me because everyone at some point questions their own faith.