Oh scary but liked it
keep up ...5/5:)

You really did the dark tone justice. I love the single-word lines; it made the flow dramatic and beautiful. But the capitalisation in each of the beginning lines disrupted with the flow a bit, in my opinion. I only capitalize each beginning letter when it comes to acrostics without following the punctuation. I think you should follow the punctuation, and not capitalize when unnecessary.
Still, a really good piece. Just stated some advice that can be used in the future :)
I also like the adding of persona in the end. Keep writing
-X

Liked it cary on

WOWZERS!!
So different from your other poems, but just as enjoyable!

My sense is that these are mental monsters triggered by something of significance... Hopefully all id well now.

Another 5/5

Very nice piece, the past can indeed haunt like monsters do

5/5

Very intense. like a monster is chasing someone and your just there or something like that? i dont know. i like these types of poems lots. again the simple approach worked really well here.