I've had the horrible experience of having witnessed our house burn down in flames, so I can somehow relate. The memories we've built there, gone in a flash..
This piece came out as lyrical to me with the repetition, and it kind of worked. I like it. Just some typos with disappearing, corner, and satisfied.
Keep writing :)
-X

im using this for a project i like this poem its so good and i kinda relate to it i'll give you credit- LJ

im using this for a project i like this poem its so good and i kinda relate to it i'll give you credit- LJ
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