Love without Pain

by ArtistrySoul   May 9, 2012


Love without pain

Never attempting to unwind
these nested arms against
your perfume skin

Love without pain

Your ear up against my chest,
can you hear my pain
such a beautiful flower,
not the one clipped in your hair

Tantalising laughter,
fun and smiles
around you even if we disagree

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Good imagery. I like the way you wrote it.
    Nice piece:))

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    I like the words . but what i dont understand is , is she your girlfriend or you fantasizing this ? why would that be pain if she did that?
    good description 3\5

    • 12 years ago

      by ArtistrySoul

      Nope I don't have girlfriend and it was just fantasizing about love. It was meant to be love but you wouldn't feel any pain from it even when you not having much fun with that person

      (hope that makes sense :S)....but thanks for your thoughts, appreciated :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I too love the images. Simple, but well written. Im sure it means a lot to you, great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    You definitely have a way with words, I'd say you have talent. I am a huge fan of short poems with long meanings. The details are also wonderful, i could see it before my eyes. Very nicely done 5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by Just A Stupid Girl

    That is really beautiful. its really good. 5/5

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