Umbrage

Very interesting to read a poem written from the perspective of a toilet bowl... even weirder to say. lol But it works. And it does bring a mournful feeling with it.

"I just cry the pain as the turmoil
carries him into my dark hole..."

Congratulations this is good stuff, and not many people can say they can write a meaningful and beautiful poem about an experience a toilet bowl had. :))

5/5
Jenn

What a tragedy, that this kind of thing happens in this world.

I love the flow of the word's in tis poem a lot very well written :) 5/5

Not sure how I feel about this poem

I understand your disgust but I dont really feel your disgust in particular.

Every action, owes an answer. At the verge of death, judgement comes.