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by Adan7777 May 10, 2012 category : Love, romance / i love you
Your eyes still burn me with every word of radiant soft love Touch of your kisses kill as they heal still they consume me My thought acquit The common An ignites passion Towering acrostic poetry An ink reality Is complete With every sweet Syllable and said Tearing down mythic Into symbolic Tears lost in law freedom found in spirit Speak To me of pain and love Adan7777
by Yrem Crish
Nice penned. "With every sweet Syllable said" I like this part..but it is more beautiful if you put you between "syllable" and "said". Still I really enjoyed reading this stuff. Keep up the good work:)