The Future Love Of You And Me

Positive outlook, A pure romantic indeed..
great writings..
5/5

True love, so sweet. <3 5/5

Nice poem
i like it a lot
have many emotions
powerful emotion all the way through the poem till the ending line
flow was good
word choice was nice too
some grammar mistakes like
"Our daughter proud to call us mom and dad,"
u should say "Our daughter is proud"

"Seeing us still in love like that once ago day."
this line wasnt flowing as well as the rest of the poem

I suggest u change it to
"Seeing us still in love like that day ago."
flowing better for me like that

other than this i love this poem a lot
but to be honest i can expect what u are writing
"as somebody told me be4" makes it a bit boring to read as u dont change the image you try to show a lot
i think you should try new style to write in and look for new images and so

still good piece
5/5 keep writing =)

Josh just read it, he thinks it's a good poem, it's a miracle, lol.

The assurances you give to your loved one are warm and real. I would suggest you put some commas especially the first stanza so that the poem flows better. Good work lav