by CathyButterflyJC May 10, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Some of the words in here were worse on my orginial but I changed them no matter how made I had been to cause myself to put the swear words in, I don't use those words, and I try so hard to never say them, so I changed them, I'm surprised I got so angry to use them in the first place for a the orginial |
Been there, done it, amazing write 5/5 |
by Special K
You produce some much emotion with these words. Anger, frustration, hurt ect. I love everything about this even though it's a sorrowful poem, keep writing please! |
Awwwww sweety i can feel the pain soo bad im soo sorry! ican relate to that poem! and the wording is very nice! :) sad tho and i would cry but im kinda shallow and won't cause it would ruin my makeup lol |
by Max
Hmm |
If a heart get hurt deeply, it is not easy |