If a heart get hurt deeply, it is not easy
to be restored. Sometimes it will stick
forever.

Hmm
this is written in anger that is so clear
but it isnt so bad
there is a flow and emotion though the flow was dropping at some parts but it was there
this isnt the best you can do in writing
to be honest i didnt like it as much as i liked the ones be4 it
still kinda good work in it
keep writing =)

Awwwww sweety i can feel the pain soo bad im soo sorry! ican relate to that poem! and the wording is very nice! :) sad tho and i would cry but im kinda shallow and won't cause it would ruin my makeup lol

You produce some much emotion with these words. Anger, frustration, hurt ect. I love everything about this even though it's a sorrowful poem, keep writing please!

Been there, done it, amazing write 5/5