The only thing I did not like was the lack of punctuation. A lot of poems I've read here lack punctuation, which makes the poem hard to understand. Though it didn't make it that hard with your poem, the flow was fast, because there was no punctuation. Use punctuation, that's the only advice I can give you, other than that, I love the imagery of this piece. This is relatable. A lot of people just starting to write poems find poetry as their outlet, but after some time, they find the beauty beneath words and create beautiful poetry. Great piece. Keep writing :)
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Love this. The rhymes were soft and didn't seem forced as I used to read from others! I love how you wrote about yourself as a poet. How you described poetry, and all those things related to it, whether something sad or cheerful.

'Scratching myself on a page'

This line is not leaving my head!
I just loved the way you said that. :)

Five!

Love this <3 :) 5/5