Indecision

by dan   May 11, 2012


Indecision

Where will the sun shine tomorrow
to the forest deep in the wood
behind the rock wall in the garden
to the valley down below
Where shall I walk what path shall I use
patiently waiting the sun
Foolishly waiting the sun

Birds flocking noisily as they pass by
Children are dancing and singing
springing springing

Spring though is the illusion
A merry go round
With a squeaky rusting wheels
as the sun closes the day
Leaving me to wonder
Will the sun come back tomorrow
And if to , where will it shine
What path shall I take

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  • 12 years ago

    by ddavidd

    This poem is so smooth and the language is so soft and strong. it sounds like poetry . are you sour you are not the Santa ?

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Who knows, but I do hope tht the sun will continue shining.

    Life's path are unknown but it's really good if the sun lights them for us since it's tough to walk in the dark, we might as well just stay in one place if the sun doesn't come out.. or who knows. Nice piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Illusion

    Will the sun come back tomorrow
    And if to , where will it shine
    What path shall I take.
    I like this piece from the start to the conclusion.. Kudos!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Omg Im sooooooo in love with this piece, its perfectly written:)
    Great job:)

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