This was a great poem and sad. It really expressed a lot of emotion. You showed here just how much you care about that person, yet he doesn't feel the same way. Like you brought out, that object of lust. So it makes you wonder why he puts you through all this pain. All in all a great write. :)

Its sad, but well written:)

I agree with the comments above, it is a heartbreaking poem but it expresses deep emotion and is well written!