It's a good poem darling some minor errors i should sugest to read the poem once again and see those errors lol but it's a great poem!

A tear rains(runs) down her hollow cheeks
She gasps for breath,(because) she cannot speak

Her heart is a cage for her dwelling soul
"Your no good" she (has) always told

The ache spreads through her feeble core
She's no longer accepted by whom she (was once)adored (by)

She falls to her knees, and shatters like glass
She's hit like(she were) the enemy by the (so called)family she has

Pieces of her lie on the ground,
She was once picked up, then thrown back down

(at last)One last blow, she's(been) given
(now)She lays in pieces and begs for an end(end to come)...

-Katelyn Iris Roberts

there you go sweety and email me not put it here okay?

Your no good" she (has) always(been) told