Comments : When it rains

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Wow. A splendid poem! This piece is very meaningful and the emotion is very powerful. I love the way you write your poem here...the rhythm and the scheme is clearly stated. The imagery and the metaphors are great, I really amaze with this brilliant work. Great!
    5/5-C

  • 12 years ago

    by Max

    You just left me speechless after finishing this fantastic poem
    idk where to start
    is it the perfect flow or the wording
    or the way you written this
    it is just perfect in every way
    it had a great Imagery
    and have an important meaning
    it is bad when people talk about you and make rumors around you while you are just a normal person
    i agree with crishmerl that you used a very powerful metaphors in this poem

    it is so emotional too

    for me i like the starting stanza the most in all the poem

    it really made the image of the poem complete

    In all this is a v.good write
    5/5 keep writing =)