Drunken Love

by Meme   May 13, 2012


Tonight, love seemed drunk
a bit, or was it me who lost
my soberness ... yet again!

I remember a day when, in
your name; I raised my glass
"for love"; or at least the idea
of it.

It's so easy to fall in the name
of love, but the catch is that
you spend a lifetime keeping
it awake.

Well here I am, drinking this
last shot .. of love. So until
we meet again, until I wake
you up ..

.. I guess its a farewell.

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© Copyright 2012 by: gIrL
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  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Girl, reading your work I can see why I have you in my fav's. This poem is awesome. I love the metaphors and images. You are seriously talented. I loved this write completely. So sad and the last line just got me

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    You most definitely can get drunk on love! love this, 5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    This poems somewhere relates to old memories that hurts and make us happy sometimes. both..

    so lovely written short innocent sad writing style.
    we miss someone to who we love. and few memories really hurts inside... i like the way you choose the title... great work.. take care

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

    <3!

    I was NOT the inspiration, Meme. Your lovely heart is!

    'I remember a day when, in
    your name; I raised my glass
    "for love"; or at least the idea
    of it.'

    ^
    That was such a heartfelt part. My heart skipped a beat or maybe two! I loved how you said simply that you sacrificed, loved the use of 'in your name'. Really simple and great word choice!

    Psssst, its = it's ;)

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