Comments : In suburbia

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Will leave a better comment. This one tops my favorites by you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Wooooooooow Larry !!

    I love the warm vibe that this poem reflects. That sounds like a perfect vacation, and to share with those you love is just great. Wish you many more of these :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this!!!

    The images are spectacular. I love the simple life like this. Being with family, doing family things. Watching the kids play sport. I loved watching my niece and nephew play sports it was fun and awesome. Proud moments came up from these times.

    This poem is so humble and lovely. I believe that having this kind of experience just makes you lucky. I mean it's sad that not everyone can have these moments so it's great to be able to cherish them whenever you can. I mean your last stanza got me though. It's like you feel guilty for feeling this kind of happiness when there are bad things going on in the word. I love this poem for its strength and beauty.

    Awesome write

    x