Ode to a farm girl

by Thomas   May 13, 2012


I really loved you
Looked past your imperfections
Not knowing what to do
Always looking for solutions

You were learning about kids
But you were one yourself
About me you didn't give 2 shits
Only thinking of yourself

Your only righteous claim
Was that you weren't an adult
To me it was all the same
It just added injury to insult

But nothing tops the way we broke up
You were afraid of facing me personally
So I couldn't tell you to shut up
So you relied on technology

Sending me a text message
Then disappearing forever
You implanted this message
I should have loved you never

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Well, the story of your poem is good though there are some clumsy words to read but I like the ideas. It is about the persona was expressing his feeling about the girl he loves but she never care about him. Yeah, breaking up with a relationship without any reason is hard to understand and especially that it was just a text message from her and without any explanation. I hope you are alright now. Good piece and keep writing:)

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