Comments : Rain, My Mirror

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    I loved the rhymes here and there, the Shakespearian usage of wrds. Really enticing and captivating!
    This is a winner the next week, I bet you.
    I felt as if I am reading one of those plays that leave you completely speechless... I didn't expect to be as amazed when I read the title.

    'Must this very solitude, this very haven I once sought,
    have changed it's face to the one my self sought escape?'
    ^
    This one spoke of solitude, of being lost. I just loved how you put this. Pure!
    I just don't think 'adieu' needs a capitalized 'a'? You might think of fixing it. ;)

    Really, really loved the read and will analyze it later. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Nice flow and nice poem girl
    Lady Donia