I loved the rhymes here and there, the Shakespearian usage of wrds. Really enticing and captivating!
This is a winner the next week, I bet you.
I felt as if I am reading one of those plays that leave you completely speechless... I didn't expect to be as amazed when I read the title.
'Must this very solitude, this very haven I once sought,
have changed it's face to the one my self sought escape?'
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This one spoke of solitude, of being lost. I just loved how you put this. Pure!
I just don't think 'adieu' needs a capitalized 'a'? You might think of fixing it. ;)
Really, really loved the read and will analyze it later. :)