Comments : Forget Him

  • 12 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Thats one helluva journey girl, when you got a lot of stuff to forget here, and I wish you goodluck. The poem, its really good, the rhymes are there to make it sounding great, words chosen were simple yet I think the most effective ones, all in all you did one great job. Keep it rockin, and keep the faith, things might turn out for the best, again, good luck.

  • 12 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    Forget the time that went so fast
    Forget the love that moved, its past
    Forget he said he'd leave you never
    Remember that he's gone forever.

    Awwwww.... this is really sad but somehow it made me smile. The path to forgetting a loved one is tough but if you are strong enough, it will be alright. :)